haiku in green

dive into green sea
swim in green wetsuit a tease
green island green dreams
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Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 4:58 AM
Creative use of color in this Haiku. Thank you for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations on my POTD. Sara K
Jones Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Hugs Sara and thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Love all the greens, Karen
Jones Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 2:13 PM
Thanks Andrea. Hugs
Sambourne Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Green has such metaphorical power in your fine Haiku. Such a bounty of hope + resurrected life after winter in the word "green." Congratulations! Brian
Jones Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 5:43 PM
Green is very cool and versatile. Thanks but I am not sure why you said congrats. Lol.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Nice!
Jones Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 8:17 AM
Kim thanks.
Hind Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 7:51 PM
Very cute!
Jones Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 5:10 AM
Thanks Paige! Have a nice weekend.
Messina Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 3:48 AM
Lovely haiku, Karen. Thanks for stopping by! Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs Charlie
Jones Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Hugs Charlie. My pleasure and happy weekend to YOU as well.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 7:10 PM
A lovely Haiku Karen, green dreams are a dreamer’s delight… Belle
Jones Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 7:14 PM
Thanks Belle!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 11:54 PM
Aloha, Karen! Our island's windward side is where Hilo town is located. It is both wet and green here. Lots of green turtles bobbed in and out of the water's surface, swaying palms, and waterfalls pouring out from forested greens. Then evenings aglow chartreuse from the town lights. Later comes the emerald nights with nature's echoes. Again, I'm benefitting from your poetic expressions--impressive, my friend! Aloha, William
Jones Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 3:31 AM
Wow. Sounds amazing William. Your description is so lovely. Wish I could see it! Thanks for sharing your blessed daily views and for liking my poem.
Sharma  Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 9:26 PM
The green magic painted here is really charismatic! Swimming in green, diving into green seas, swirling in green islands and living green dreams.. Wow, dear Karen, I absolutely love this haiku, very creative :)
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 9:38 PM
Hiya thanks so much!
Romios Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Sounds perfect, to me! Get ne a wetsuit, Pangie xx
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Thanks for reading Pangie!
Severo Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 1:07 AM
Loved this little gem xoxo
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 4:15 AM
Aurore thanks for visiting and leaving a kind comment! Love light and hugs to you.
Bowring Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:42 PM
This is a lovely Haiku dear Karen and I LOVE green- will always be my favourite colour so would paint green everywhere in life! I love your carefully selected chosen words. The last line,’ green island green dreams’ is gorgeous! Enjoyed reading it ( purple is a great colour too) Hugs and smiles to you for a happy, colourful weekend x :):)
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 4:13 AM
Green is so poetically diverse so it was easy and fun to write about. Thanks for your kind comments. Have a great weekend. Love light and hugs to you Christina!
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Fun poem Karen, but I prefer the sea to be blue ok maybe turquoise green lollol:-) hugs Jan xx
Jones Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:50 PM
OK hugs Jan
Faulkner Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 2:17 PM
I love green, and enjoyed all the green imagery in your haiku, hope all your green dreams come true~
Jones Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Thanks Michelle. Hugs
Greenhough Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 7:48 AM
Beautiful Haiku. Green is such a diverse color, I can see it swirl like a kaleidoscope.
Jones Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 8:41 AM
Thanks. Agreed. It is diverse and inspiring.
Eslinger Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 7:55 PM
From deep sea to dreams. A vast traveling! It actually did give me a sense of flight. hmmm. Nice haiku. Good to meet your work. May the muse be with you 8-)
Jones Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 12:20 AM
Kind of you to comment and stop by. Thanks Sally.
Situation Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 7:01 PM
Must be your favorite color.
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Nope. I like purple most. But think green is cool and poetically diverse.
Mills  Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Nice!
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Thanks so much Susan!
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 12:29 PM
Cute one all in green!
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 10:53 AM
A creative "Haiku in Green" write. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day..........
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Paula glad you enjoyed it and thanks for stopping by.
Poet Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Enchanting instances amidst an expansive expanse of ocean. Extraordinary visuals and a delightful haiku. Abundant blessings, Karen.
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Thanks dear Sotto and blessings as well!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Made me think of Kermit, “It’s not easy being green.” Unless of course you are an emerald green sea. I enjoyed your green Haiku.
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 9:36 AM
I remember that Green Song Kermit sang! Lol. Glad you liked this poem! Hugs Richard.
Faure Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 7:42 AM
Enjoyed very much.
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 8:00 AM
Joyce I am happy you did. Thanks for stopping by my page.
Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 7:09 AM
- Lovely colored haiku, Karen :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Thanks for reading Anne-Lise and hugs.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 5:15 AM
Magical moments in a vast stretch of sea. Great imagery and a lovely haiku. Blessings.
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Thanks for reading Victor!
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