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haiku in green

dive into green sea
swim in green wetsuit a tease
green island green dreams

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/28/2023 4:58:00 AM

Creative use of color in this Haiku. Thank you for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations on my POTD. Sara K

Karen Jones
Date: 11/28/2023 5:56:00 AM

Hugs Sara and thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2023 1:50:00 PM

Love all the greens, Karen

Karen Jones
Date: 11/22/2023 2:13:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. Hugs

Brian Sambourne

Date: 11/15/2023 3:43:00 PM

Green has such metaphorical power in your fine Haiku. Such a bounty of hope + resurrected life after winter in the word "green." Congratulations! Brian

Karen Jones
Date: 11/15/2023 5:43:00 PM

Green is very cool and versatile. Thanks but I am not sure why you said congrats. Lol.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/10/2023 5:46:00 AM

Nice!

Karen Jones
Date: 11/10/2023 8:17:00 AM

Kim thanks.

Paige Hind

Date: 10/27/2023 7:51:00 PM

Very cute!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/28/2023 5:10:00 AM

Thanks Paige! Have a nice weekend.

Charles Messina

Date: 10/27/2023 3:48:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Karen. Thanks for stopping by! Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs Charlie

Karen Jones
Date: 10/27/2023 7:55:00 AM

Hugs Charlie. My pleasure and happy weekend to YOU as well.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/22/2023 7:10:00 PM

A lovely Haiku Karen, green dreams are a dreamer’s delight… Belle

Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2023 7:14:00 PM

Thanks Belle!

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/21/2023 11:54:00 PM

Aloha, Karen! Our island's windward side is where Hilo town is located. It is both wet and green here. Lots of green turtles bobbed in and out of the water's surface, swaying palms, and waterfalls pouring out from forested greens. Then evenings aglow chartreuse from the town lights. Later comes the emerald nights with nature's echoes. Again, I'm benefitting from your poetic expressions--impressive, my friend! Aloha, William

Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2023 3:31:00 AM

Wow. Sounds amazing William. Your description is so lovely. Wish I could see it! Thanks for sharing your blessed daily views and for liking my poem.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/21/2023 9:26:00 PM

The green magic painted here is really charismatic! Swimming in green, diving into green seas, swirling in green islands and living green dreams.. Wow, dear Karen, I absolutely love this haiku, very creative :)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 9:38:00 PM

Hiya thanks so much!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/21/2023 2:24:00 PM

Sounds perfect, to me! Get ne a wetsuit, Pangie xx

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 3:57:00 PM

Thanks for reading Pangie!

Aurore Severo

Date: 10/21/2023 1:07:00 AM

Loved this little gem xoxo

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 4:15:00 AM

Aurore thanks for visiting and leaving a kind comment! Love light and hugs to you.

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/20/2023 11:42:00 PM

This is a lovely Haiku dear Karen and I LOVE green- will always be my favourite colour so would paint green everywhere in life! I love your carefully selected chosen words. The last line,’ green island green dreams’ is gorgeous! Enjoyed reading it ( purple is a great colour too) Hugs and smiles to you for a happy, colourful weekend x :):)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 4:13:00 AM

Green is so poetically diverse so it was easy and fun to write about. Thanks for your kind comments. Have a great weekend. Love light and hugs to you Christina!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2023 2:32:00 PM

Fun poem Karen, but I prefer the sea to be blue ok maybe turquoise green lollol:-) hugs Jan xx

Karen Jones
Date: 10/20/2023 3:50:00 PM

OK hugs Jan

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/20/2023 2:17:00 PM

I love green, and enjoyed all the green imagery in your haiku, hope all your green dreams come true~

Karen Jones
Date: 10/20/2023 3:50:00 PM

Thanks Michelle. Hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/20/2023 7:48:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku. Green is such a diverse color, I can see it swirl like a kaleidoscope.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/20/2023 8:41:00 AM

Thanks. Agreed. It is diverse and inspiring.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/19/2023 7:55:00 PM

From deep sea to dreams. A vast traveling! It actually did give me a sense of flight. hmmm. Nice haiku. Good to meet your work. May the muse be with you 8-)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/20/2023 12:20:00 AM

Kind of you to comment and stop by. Thanks Sally.

The Situation

Date: 10/19/2023 7:01:00 PM

Must be your favorite color.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 7:07:00 PM

Nope. I like purple most. But think green is cool and poetically diverse.

Susan Mills

Date: 10/19/2023 2:58:00 PM

Nice!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 3:29:00 PM

Thanks so much Susan!