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haiku in autumn finches, warblers, wrens and kinglets sing season's songs-- hues of leaves amaze 9-9-19 A Transition of Seasons Haiku Poetry Contest~N/A~ Sponsor Tania Kitchin

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/28/2021 9:41:00 AM

A stunning haiku, Connie. Your artistry captures the enchantment of Fall, my favorite season, with flair. A fiesta for the senses, such is the magic of your wonderfully gifted pen. Warmest wishes to you for a happy and fulfilling new year, my dear friend.. ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/28/2021 12:24:00 PM

I am glad to know you enjoyed this haiku Susan. It did not make the long list so I had my doubts about it. I too love autumn best. I wish you a wonderful new year my friend. Thank you for your lovely comment. Blessings xxoo

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 12/7/2019 12:14:00 AM

What a lovely Haiku! It brings the autumn alive. And congrats for winning the prize.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/4/2019 4:15:00 PM

This captures the magic of autumn so well, 'hues of leaves amaze' - so colorful!

Linda Milgate

Date: 9/12/2019 11:29:00 PM

enjoyed your Haiku and the songs of the season. Lovely

Vladislav Raven

Date: 9/12/2019 8:43:00 PM

Hi Connie, I do so love the Haiku form. This was a wonderful Haiku. I could picture the birds and hear the birdsong. Soon, such vibrant colours shall be upon us. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/12/2019 7:29:00 AM

I like every single bird you mentioned and now I have to look up kinglets in the dictionary.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/12/2019 2:10:00 PM

Caren, Google them and listen to their song. They sound so beautiful. Thank you my friend. I didn't get on the winning list, but then I didn't expect too because I recognize good haiku and know that this one did not have that Aha moment! Thank you. xxoo

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/10/2019 11:46:00 AM

Magically penned beauty. Good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/9/2019 11:04:00 PM

Lovely, Connie.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/9/2019 10:35:00 PM

Hawaiian birds are busy singing in the choir, "Please light the fire!" Good luck! Aloha! Rico

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/9/2019 7:42:00 PM

love the colors of autumn just not the cold to come with it...you really bring the scents, sound and colors to life in this beautifully penned haiku my friend...love it :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/9/2019 6:52:00 PM

Ah, this Hawaiian is smitten--Nice write Connie ~ Aloha always William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2019 5:49:00 PM

Just beautiful, Connie!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/9/2019 4:33:00 PM

Hope you feel better after the Chiof! Meanwhile, great Hailu Panagiota xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/9/2019 3:17:00 PM

Beautiful Connie! So bright to read today :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/9/2019 3:01:00 PM

Beautiful sights and sounds of autumn in your poem, Connie..so well written!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/9/2019 3:03:00 PM

Thank you very much Vijay. I adore this time of year. Have a great week my friend. I am off but will visit your page when I return home later today. xxoo

Chris Green

Date: 9/9/2019 2:10:00 PM

This was beautiful Connie. I love the change of the seasons, there is something very special when that happens. Your wonderful poem expresses that wonderfully

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/9/2019 3:01:00 PM

Thank you very much Chris. I do so enjoy autumn season and love writing about it. xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 9/9/2019 1:51:00 PM

how gorgeous Connie, I hope Tania loves this beauty and I also love the cute picture:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/9/2019 3:00:00 PM

Thank you Jan. I love haiku but seldom write it anymore. I am off to see the chiropractor and to have lunch with my good friend. Have a great week! xxoo