Haiku Heaven

spacial wonderment eager appreciation perpetuity ©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins July 7, 2012

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Matthew Anish

Date: 7/24/2012 11:05:00 AM

A extermely clever use of that Asian form. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Daver Austin

Date: 7/13/2012 11:18:00 AM

The spacial wonderment is a great line - takes one into other dimensions. Love, daver

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 7/11/2012 8:54:00 PM

Love it...patrick

Terry O'Leary

Date: 7/10/2012 4:11:00 PM

Kathy, very nice... everything 'fits'... I've tried 'Haiku' several times... without success... I cheated once by taking an already written poem and 'reformulating' some of the verses into a sequence of Haiku's which halfway 'worked' ... Anyway somes got it (you) and somes don't (me)... Terry

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/9/2012 7:31:00 PM

Reading a lot of haiku tonight, yours was a pleasure.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2012 10:41:00 AM

very clever haiku, my friend

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/8/2012 12:43:00 PM

...soup mail! :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/7/2012 8:23:00 AM

The way that you have chosen 3- and 5- syllable words to paint your picture is remarkable. Perfect form and language. Well done, Kathryn... Best wishes, Keith

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/7/2012 6:33:00 AM

‡ I Love Fantasies * Wonderment & Appreciation But More, Sweet Anticipation * My Luv, Rachel ‡