Haiku: Frogs

Haiku: Frogs Frogs leap from a pond, Wet skins glisten in sunlight. Freedom in motion.

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Date: 3/30/2024 3:49:00 PM

You painted a picture in my mind with this fine Haiku, my friend. I like it! Have a great weekend. Bill

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/31/2024 6:42:00 AM

Hi Bill, thank you for your kind words, much appreciated. You too have a fabulous weekend, my friend.

Date: 3/28/2024 7:54:00 PM

That last line really sums it up. Nice. ~ Gershon

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/31/2024 6:41:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Have a great weekend.

Date: 3/15/2024 8:05:00 PM

I can see those frogs when I read your haiku. It's very complete.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/16/2024 12:35:00 AM

Thank you for your support Hilda, much appreciated. Wishing you a fabulous weekend.

Date: 3/15/2024 4:32:00 AM

I can see it happening through your words. If I may offer... Haiku form allows no capitalization unless it's a proper name.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2024 6:17:00 AM

No thanks needed, Zyrool. Thank you for accepting my suggestion.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/15/2024 5:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Lin for reading and your feedback. I am blessed to receive your help in correcting my errors. I am very grateful. Thank you, Lin.