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Haiku: Frogs


Haiku: Frogs

Frogs leap from a pond,
Wet skins glisten in sunlight.
Freedom in motion.

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Bill Baker

March 30, 2024 at 3:49 PM

You painted a picture in my mind with this fine Haiku, my friend. I like it! Have a great weekend. Bill

Zyrool Gifford

March 31, 2024 at 6:42 AM

Hi Bill, thank you for your kind words, much appreciated. You too have a fabulous weekend, my friend.

Gershon Wolf

March 28, 2024 at 7:54 PM

That last line really sums it up. Nice. ~ Gershon

Zyrool Gifford

March 31, 2024 at 6:41 AM

Thank you my friend. Have a great weekend.

Hilda Greenhough

March 15, 2024 at 8:05 PM

I can see those frogs when I read your haiku. It's very complete.

Zyrool Gifford

March 16, 2024 at 12:35 AM

Thank you for your support Hilda, much appreciated. Wishing you a fabulous weekend.

Lin Lane

March 15, 2024 at 4:32 AM

I can see it happening through your words. If I may offer... Haiku form allows no capitalization unless it's a proper name.

Lin Lane

March 15, 2024 at 6:17 AM

No thanks needed, Zyrool. Thank you for accepting my suggestion.

Zyrool Gifford

March 15, 2024 at 5:05 AM

Thank you so much Lin for reading and your feedback. I am blessed to receive your help in correcting my errors. I am very grateful. Thank you, Lin.

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