Haiku Five

Old dead pine tree Lighting strike splits trunk in half Many left homeless

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/25/2013 12:36:00 AM

Great sympathy for the tiny insects living inside... I liked the thought process cause typically when I think of "lightning in the woods" what first comes to mind is forest fires... but you took a new and different approach on it. Cool!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/25/2013 7:24:00 AM

Thanks Timothy, I struggle with this form. Look up Questionku, give it a try I think you would be a natural. Look under forms.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2013 4:01:00 PM

VEry interesting one. WE don't usually think of all the creatures that abide inside those old trees!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/7/2013 7:45:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.