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Haiku : Legos

Obliteration. Relativity Breaking. Imagination. Regeneration Awakening Creation. Pure Stimulation. Metamorphosis Conceptualizing life Recognizing form. Anatomical. Perfecting Automation Assembling Mind Storms. :D I got rhythm for Legos... Love I still work on.... ============== Thank you Nate and everyone. You were sooo much help. Hugs and with my Love, I continue to practice Haiku. Properly as 575 And then also as 585 to come

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Raul Moreno

Date: 6/1/2009 11:48:00 PM

Excellent work Izzy, love your vivid imagination, keep up the good work...Raul

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/29/2009 10:00:00 PM

They're NOT as easy as they first appeared, you're right on that one girlfriend! They make me live at the Wiki and Dictionary.com tho, which never hurts a vocabulary what need growin'. ;) This little write was inspired by a 'tion' thing. lol. And that's just too funny. but true. I don't even have MindStorms. yep, that was the year I asked for them from Santa and got coaled stockings instead. (arar) but I dream. hugs! I love reading you, looking forward to your Haiku too!

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/29/2009 1:36:00 PM

I love Legos! Awesome haiku sequence. Well done! Love, Shar