Haiku : Legos

Obliteration.
Relativity Breaking.
Imagination.

Regeneration
Awakening Creation.
Pure Stimulation.

Metamorphosis
Conceptualizing life
Recognizing form. 

Anatomical.
Perfecting Automation
Assembling Mind Storms. 



:D
I got rhythm for Legos... Love I still work on....

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Thank you Nate and everyone.  You were sooo much help.
Hugs and with my Love, I continue to practice Haiku.

Properly as 575
And then also as 585 to come

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/1/2009 11:48:00 PM
Excellent work Izzy, love your vivid imagination, keep up the good work...Raul
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Date: 5/29/2009 10:00:00 PM
They're NOT as easy as they first appeared, you're right on that one girlfriend! They make me live at the Wiki and Dictionary.com tho, which never hurts a vocabulary what need growin'. ;) This little write was inspired by a 'tion' thing. lol. And that's just too funny. but true. I don't even have MindStorms. yep, that was the year I asked for them from Santa and got coaled stockings instead. (arar) but I dream. hugs! I love reading you, looking forward to your Haiku too!
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Date: 5/29/2009 1:36:00 PM
I love Legos! Awesome haiku sequence. Well done! Love, Shar
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