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Haiku Hobble

On white washed cobble a cricket creeping along ~ old man stooped and bent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/17/2014 2:30:00 PM
I drive my daughter nuts when I stop and look at bark on the tree . . . God's nature has so many surprises . . . great haiku
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Michael Newman
Date: 11/17/2014 2:37:00 PM
Thanks,and diversity to exceed our poetry ! Miken
Date: 11/17/2014 11:41:00 AM
Hi Mr. Newman, Very solid haiku with a strong structure and cute picture. Enjoyable read. Have a great day. Earl
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Michael Newman
Date: 11/17/2014 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Earl. your comment is very valuable to me. new to the poetry soup group. Appreciated Miken