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haiku : hiku : swan

haiku : swan —————- feathers of grace white glide across waters of time swallow dragonflies hiku ~~~~ f e athe R s Of GRACE WHITE g L i d E a C r o S s W a T e r s OF T I M E s w a L S L e O i W l DRA f GON

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2025 5:50:00 AM

Congrats, Ghairo!

Ghairo Daniels
Date: 6/21/2025 2:52:00 AM

ThkU, To U 2, Kim.

Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 6/13/2025 2:59:00 AM

This is a beautifully concise and evocative poem! It creates a vivid image with just a few words, suggesting themes of elegance, the passage of time, and natural predation. Great shape.

Ghairo Daniels
Date: 6/15/2025 4:10:00 AM

ThkU for lovely comment, Bernard. I do appreciate your kind read. I’m enjoying practicing this new form, as you do too. I have to practice it more to get to your word architecture. Blessings, dear Poet. x.