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Haiku No 36

Piercing winds whistle Hailstones clobber window panes Cat stretches and purrs

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Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/13/2011 6:46:00 AM

Hi Deirdre. I feel like leaving the Haiku alone when I read yours. Like the way that you show the independence of the cat, not caring what weather does. I can write 20 lines of verse while writing 1 Haiku. Another gifted write from you, (as expected now) Eamon

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/13/2011 3:50:00 AM

Deirdre, this is beautiful. I have two cats and love them. They make great images within haiku:))) I feel that wind there in Tramore - we have had such strange weather recently, wonderful haiku:)))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2011 6:48:00 PM

ahhh, this now is juxtaposition!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2011 5:27:00 PM

Wonderful expresion with nice images, Deirdre