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Haiku # 24 .

GREEN LEAVES TURNING BROWN . AUTUMN'S LASTING LEGACY WHEN WINTER WILL WIN .

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2013 11:51:00 PM

I came right to this one that I had not seen before, and it's about Fall, which is so close to us in Utah now. Good one.

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/7/2009 2:29:00 PM

Man your work is good, I write haiku's also...Raul

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/1/2008 6:54:00 PM

NO!!!!!!!!! I want beaches and tanning lotion. I had snow in October. I feel more depressed than a polar bear on the equator. Think GREEN!!! Vince

Deneen White

Date: 10/31/2008 2:28:00 PM

i love this write and there is hope within that we know a change is emminent, great write and thanks for your comments, take care D-nyce

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 10/30/2008 5:31:00 AM

Smile. I have just finished reading all your wonderful poems Sean, and I am beginning to get the impression that you like Haikus! I enjoyed every one of them and look forward to number 26. Nigel

Brian Strand

Date: 10/30/2008 1:22:00 AM

Green turning brown ...surely not in Erin's fair isle Sean or are your referring to the recession, they keep wittering on about.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always witty comments.

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/29/2008 4:45:00 PM

~lol~ I'm cracking up at Kristin's comment! And I bloodywell agree with her! It's about time you posted! Well, bah humbug and I happen to LOVE winter. Of course I don't live where it goes below zero too much, but hey - awesome haiku dude! : ) Love, Shar

Date: 10/29/2008 11:45:00 AM

Unfortunately, winter does win--though I hate to think of the below zero temps. Nice use of this short form to carry your message. Keep on writing. Karen

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/29/2008 11:27:00 AM

Very clear write. Flows well and hold its form. Nice job.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/29/2008 11:01:00 AM

It's bloodywell about time, you crazy Irishman! Sheesh, I thought I'd never live to see haiku #24. thank goodness I lived to read it, as it is crisp and clear, just what i needed to reanimate my near-dead corpse. lol now...how long until #25? write ooooon, man! love K :)

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/29/2008 9:58:00 AM

Sean, the imagery is clear making the meaning of this clear as well. The write is true to form in syllable count and flow. May I make a suggestion? Rather than winter winning, how about "Soon, winter will reign" Just a thought but otherwise an excellent write. Michael