Haiku # 23

The morning chill bites Deciduous turns to brown It's the rise of Fall .

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2010 9:50:00 PM

cool last line, the rise of fall!

Helen J Radford

Date: 11/1/2008 1:25:00 AM

cleverly crafted Sean

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/31/2008 12:53:00 AM

Nice Haiku, clever insight...keep it up.

Farah Chamma

Date: 10/25/2008 4:43:00 AM

Wonderful...Last line is great....Thank you for sharing... TYONe, farah

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/4/2008 5:10:00 AM

Excellent Haiku - In fact I believe outstanding would be a much better word to use - I liked it a lot bro - God Bless

Farah Chamma

Date: 10/2/2008 6:31:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku..beautiful! Thank you for sharing... TYOne, Farah

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/8/2008 6:17:00 PM

I'm fairly new to the soup...but I'm learning that you are king of the haiku!! Lovely poem!...Carrie

Deneen White

Date: 8/27/2008 6:35:00 PM

hi Sean, I like this write, sometimes the less said the better, and thanks for the comment on rain dance, take care D-nyce

Date: 8/16/2008 11:45:00 AM

YOUR TALKING ABOUT THE FALL WEATHER BUT COME REAL WITH IT DEEP IN YOU SOUL RATE YOU 2% NOW GO CHECK OUT MY WORK

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/13/2008 7:00:00 AM

Now come on Sean, they tell me it's green all year over there. When I close my eyes and dream of going back, it's green even in the fall. God Bless. Vince

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/12/2008 4:22:00 PM

They say when you're good you're good. I say this one is awesome my clever friend. Love Heidie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/12/2008 6:01:00 AM

It is a funny summer, isn't it? Excellent form and the words you so well use in this really bring forth the truth of summers change. Michael

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/11/2008 8:51:00 AM

Clever man. My favorite seasons is almost here. Sorry my other comment was so emotional. Great to have you back. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/11/2008 3:59:00 AM

Love the twist as Brian put it, the rise of fall is surely in the air (YAY!) I cannot wait! Well done, my dear! Love Kristin

Brian Strand

Date: 8/11/2008 12:23:00 AM

Like the twist in L3 Sean,Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and here's to Padrig..on a roll what a guy