Haiku # 20

Darkest  hour  now  fades

Illuminating   light  shines

Just  then..... The  East  wins  .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/12/2010 10:12:00 PM
At a moment's notice! Nature is splendid!
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Date: 2/22/2009 1:18:00 AM
this is an excellent haiku!! loved the way you just darkened me... Sean, where are you.. missing your writes and your wittiness!! don't let that brain of yours RUST!... ~ Arany
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Date: 8/28/2008 10:05:00 AM
Love this! Anything to do with a sunrise always is good reading, but the way you put it to form ishere is amazing. Michael
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Date: 8/11/2008 12:09:00 PM
Interesting reflection in this short form. Much to think about here. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 6/12/2008 8:23:00 AM
Several senses used in ths one. I always like to squeeze as many of the senses as possible into poetry. It seems to make it come alive. Another Good one. ~Peace~Gar
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Date: 6/11/2008 2:22:00 AM
Nice one Sean!! Peace Fathima
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Date: 6/10/2008 7:35:00 PM
Very graphically put, Sean. Good one, God Bless, Cile
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