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Haiku # 13 .

CAT ON STELTH PATROL . BLACKBIRDS CHIRP THEIR WARNING CALL . SAFE , BUDGIE TALKS PEACE .....

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2010 10:16:00 PM

Did you notice I just skipped a few. I had seen them the other day! Is BUdgie a kind of bird. I take it you love to watch birds!

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/29/2009 11:19:00 AM

I like the idea of the cat sneaking up, great job...Raul

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/31/2009 7:27:00 AM

Great imagery, Sean! I am an animal ovr too. Cats are quite the huters and I love watching the show but I break it up before they can catch our sweet little feathered friends! Excelent Haiku! Love QR

Date: 1/13/2009 3:20:00 PM

Your gift of humor is a treasure! Thanks for brightening my day with this poem and for your witty comment on mine. You are good for the soul. Keep on sharing your talent with us. Karen