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Haiku # 35 .

Dawn light says hello Big Hi , Mister Mountain Top Still waters copy . Inspired by Raul's Sunlight haiku contest .

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2010 8:52:00 AM

Much of a rainy day where I am at, enjoyed your Haiku..p.d.

Wilfredo Derequito

Date: 3/9/2010 1:55:00 AM

And the man is still at 35, a long way to go till 69.

Farah Chamma

Date: 3/4/2010 12:25:00 AM

This Haiku is somehow cute. I like this one =) Farah

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/18/2010 4:29:00 AM

Congratulations Sean, on your placement in Raul’s “Sunrise” haiku contest. Again, your delightful style and humor peek out from your words. I love this one! You are definitely a winner! Smiles, Dane Ann

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/15/2010 8:23:00 PM

I love this, Sean! My congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey

Brandee Augustus

Date: 2/15/2010 12:59:00 PM

I like the first line of your haiku. I think it's a great way to describe morning light. Congratulations on your win.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2010 12:41:00 PM

congrats on the win!! love it!

Brian Strand

Date: 2/14/2010 8:35:00 AM

Too much pasta for lunch by England Sean,a bad hair day in Paris,and the Scots blew/ threw it in a sin bin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Off to hear Jonno'a comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2010 1:17:00 AM

yes, this IS a cute way to express that picture, Sean. If you wanna check out the car that bears my name Andie 55 on her license plate, I finally got my first blog and pictures up!! LUv, Andrea

Date: 2/13/2010 8:14:00 AM

Enjoyed the humor in your poem the first time I read it. Glad to see it in the winners circle for Raul's contest. Keep that humor shining!!! Enjoy your honor. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/13/2010 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Sean. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2010 5:51:00 AM

Congrats Sean on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a wonderful Haiku #35 to describe the photo.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/13/2010 4:57:00 AM

Sean, This haiku has your charming personality written into it and I see why it was a winner! Congratulations. Connie

Brian Strand

Date: 2/13/2010 1:00:00 AM

Cobgrats on your succees Sean.Maybe a double green today?Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/12/2010 11:29:00 PM

One of the most beautiful Haikus ever,Congratulations Sean:) Charma

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/12/2010 10:27:00 PM

Sean, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Date: 2/12/2010 7:20:00 PM

Nice use of personification for an creative view. I can always count on you for a touch of humor to brighten my day. Keep on writing!!!!!!! Good luck in the contest. Karen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/12/2010 1:33:00 PM

different approach, I like it!!

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/12/2010 1:30:00 PM

Nicely written Haiku. Good luck in the contest.

David Byrne

Date: 2/12/2010 4:54:00 AM

Love the last line.....clever!