Haiku :: 6 :: a Trilogy
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The following three haikus illustrate how I develop an idea. They were written over a few days. The first is my initial thought on how a relationship breaks and then recovers. The other two are more allegorical and more traditional haiku, relating to nature with 5-7-5 syllabification.
HAIKU :: 6a :: PROMISE
Together we were,
friends we remain …
we promise
HAIKU :: 6b :: CLOUDS and WINDS
Clouds interlacing
winds of night separating
rejoined by sunrise
HAIKU :: 6c :: SUN AND MOON
Sun, moon at nightfall
separated by darkness
rejoined by first light
Collection: Haiku
Copyright © Beto Riginale | Year Posted 2019
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