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Haiku 61

winter sun shines on snow drift deep footprints ~~~ freezing rain upon the sidewalk slippery slopes ~~~ frozen ice upon the pond skating rink ~~~ 14/02/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2016 8:03:00 PM

It's nice to see your wintry poems that I missed out on earlier. Thanks for visiting me today.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/21/2016 3:30:00 PM

Love your Haiku :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/19/2016 5:36:00 PM

Super HAIKU series Phyl! Lovely imagery... Well done! Keith

Ijm Seven

Date: 2/14/2016 4:18:00 PM

I really can appreciate the first, although all three were delightful. "Deep footprints" is a wonderful separation pf tbe first 2 lines allowing one's imagination to dill the gap. Well done

Ijm Seven
Date: 2/14/2016 4:18:00 PM

Excuse my poor phone skills

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2016 12:18:00 PM

- A wonderful image of winter dear Phyllis, look like what I see out of my window :) - ...... it's cold! - Thank you for many visits by you today, your words are always positive and good :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/14/2016 11:09:00 AM

beautiful imagery Phyllis:-) hugs jan xx7