Haiku 9

dwindling drafts 
flutter blank pages--
a pen rolls

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Phyllis Babcock

April 23, 2013 at 4:41 PM

Nice haiku. Thank you for the placement in your contest. It is much appreciated. love phyl

Laura Breidenthal

April 17, 2013 at 5:11 PM

Ooooh, that's nice. Someone's working up a storm. Keep up the great work! Always, Laura

Poet Tacito

April 16, 2013 at 10:51 AM

Beautiful lines!

Michael Dom

April 15, 2013 at 12:01 PM

these days, hammering away at a keyboard...like this one, Heather.

Painted Hunter

April 15, 2013 at 11:48 AM

Skittles......ha. Good question.

Painted Hunter

April 15, 2013 at 7:54 AM

Your pen is rolling....that's for sure. My pages aren't so much blank as they are chaotic...ha. Great haiku!................ninja.

Eileen Manassian

April 15, 2013 at 4:48 AM

Heather....you are a storehouse of words and ideas and lovely poems! I can't believe there are too many blank pages! ;)

Charmaine Chircop

April 15, 2013 at 1:46 AM

I can relate to this :)..so many dwindlind drafts ending in blank pages..good one

Donna Jones

April 14, 2013 at 9:18 PM

Nice one Heather.....:-)

Carrie Richards

April 14, 2013 at 7:33 PM

love this!! I have stacks of drafts!! :)

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