Haiku

steam rises from tar as thunder fades in gray skies ending urban storm 5/12/18

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/5/2018 8:45:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Sian. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2018 5:18:00 PM

very descriptive lines here. Congrats in the summer haiku contest.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/3/2018 1:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest with this true haiku! I enjoyed it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2018 7:06:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Sian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/13/2017 9:12:00 PM

Nice Piece. Here Monsoon is peeping, yet Sun is still hot. hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2017 8:12:00 AM

- ... so much rain the last week ..... swimming pool in my garden ... and the flowers drown - A great haiku, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)