Haiku 8-19-2019

weeping in the wind weary limbs creaking sadly the squirrels moved out 8/19/2019 Checked on - Howmanysyllables

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Lu Loo

Date: 8/25/2019 12:35:00 PM

those darn squirrels, lol great one dear John, congrats :)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2019 11:42:00 PM

Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/22/2019 9:40:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, John. Congratulations on your win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2019 6:19:00 PM

I love yours, John. It's very interesting and has the great last line. Congrats.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/22/2019 2:43:00 PM

Poor lonely tree! Great haiku, John! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/22/2019 2:13:00 PM

Nobody likes a noisy decrepit house, that's when it's time to move out for sure. LOL Congrats on your win, John.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2019 2:10:00 PM

I smiled at the final line John, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/22/2019 7:21:00 AM

Great image John. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/22/2019 6:22:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning haiku, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 8/19/2019 12:39:00 PM

Nicely done John