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haiku 8-19-19


gnarled oak tree branches hang like skeletal fingers icy wind brings chill tree themed haiku contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 5,7,5 checked with how many syllables 8/19/19

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Date: 8/26/2019 12:44:00 PM
When ice freezes on those bare trees you can see those fingers handing down. Awesome. love phyl
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Date: 8/23/2019 3:36:00 PM
Great imagery! I love the cold boney fingers! Nice win!
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Date: 8/22/2019 11:40:00 PM
Congratulations my dear friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/22/2019 9:28:00 PM
Jan, your imagery is darkly vibrant. Awesome haiku. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/22/2019 8:34:00 PM
Back with congrats Jan. Tom
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Date: 8/22/2019 6:18:00 PM
So lovely, JAN! Congrats! Janice
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Date: 8/22/2019 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations, my friend. I loved seeing this one of yours. chilly!
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Date: 8/22/2019 4:49:00 PM
Gnarled and skeletal...enough to bring on the chills, Jan! An image which is very striking. Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/22/2019 3:01:00 PM
Nicely done Jan....can feel the chill of fall sneaking up on my gnarled fingers...
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Date: 8/22/2019 2:37:00 PM
Excellent imagery, Jan! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 8/22/2019 2:16:00 PM
Well penned, Jan. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/22/2019 12:26:00 PM
What a scaly, dark, all hollows eve theme... Like John says... chilly...I could see this as I'm reading... A grand October/Autumn placement...Congrats on your placement. Write On! James
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/24/2019 3:01:00 PM
I was thinking of Halloween when I wrote it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/22/2019 8:18:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, Jan, this has a dark, chilly feel to it. Congrats on your win. John
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/24/2019 3:00:00 PM
Thanks john:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/22/2019 7:16:00 AM
Congrats Jan on your win with your wonderful imagery.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/22/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Jeanne:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/22/2019 6:29:00 AM
- Congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/22/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/22/2019 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations Jan on your winning placement with your lovely haiku, love the imagery! :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/22/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thanks for including me on your list Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/21/2019 12:40:00 AM
OOOOOOhhhhhhhhhhh Sexy and creepy!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/22/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/20/2019 2:12:00 PM
- A wonderful autumnal description, Jan :) - (I wrote one last night ... no sleep :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/21/2019 3:30:00 PM
Aww I know the no sleep one but today I've rested most of the day had a horrid headache but am fine now:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/20/2019 1:44:00 PM
You stuck to the 5 7 5 format - all to the good! Nice image of winter here! Peace & Love Mattthew Anish
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/21/2019 3:29:00 PM
I prefer the traditional form matthew:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/20/2019 4:04:00 AM
The mornings getting cooler and nights drawing in, love the image Jan Good luck. Tom. P.S. Have emailed you.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/21/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thanks Tom am struggling to keep up! :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/19/2019 4:16:00 PM
I love trees, you put so much character into yours here, its bound to be a winner. Hope all is well Jan, nice to read you again, been slacking in the poetry dept. lately, life is catching up on me, quickly. Love xo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/21/2019 3:28:00 PM
Same here I am not as a tive on soup as I'd like to be but other things take priority over writing:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/19/2019 4:05:00 PM
I'm seeing images of fall in your lovely haiku, Jan. Probably the "skelatal" and "gnarled" words that trigger Halloween thoughts. Very clever and intriguing haiku, hon. Wishing you success in Tania's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/21/2019 3:26:00 PM
I'm delighted you thought of autumn from the imagery, my job is done! :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/19/2019 3:02:00 PM
Love the imagery, Jan! Soon enough it will come :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/21/2019 3:25:00 PM
Yes we can see a change in the trees already! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/19/2019 2:54:00 PM
Splendid Jan. Great image in this haiku. Hugs xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/21/2019 3:25:00 PM
Thanks victor:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/19/2019 2:32:00 PM
Wonderful Jan. I could picture this and feel it. Best wishes in the contest
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/19/2019 2:34:00 PM
Thanks Chris I hope Tania likes my effort, so good to see you back, hope you are well:-) Hugs Jan xx