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Haiku 7 - 2020

north-west wind bitter fresh layer of snow on ground seeking warm shelter

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Rituko Shindo

Date: 1/11/2020 9:44:00 PM

New snow hides old snow. If we think we've overcome the difficulties, new one will fall again. Each time it's repeated, we're getting better at finding shelters,aren't we?

Carol Fillmore

Date: 1/11/2020 3:14:00 PM

Hello Darlene, lovely to meet you, too:) This haiku in response to being out in that cold and wanting warm shelter! The wind was fierce and sent the windchill way down. I discovered what I wore wasn't warm enough:(

Carol Fillmore
Date: 1/11/2020 3:15:00 PM

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/11/2020 3:03:00 PM

Hello Carol Fillmore, so nice to meet you. Yes when winter is here we all seek shelter from the cold. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/11/2020 5:50:00 PM

Hello Carol, you have to dress warm for the winter weather.Where i live is raining now has been all day. The rain melted the snow. We had a green Christmas this year.Have a nice evening my friend.