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haiku-weeping willow trees are very beautiful to me.  They grow in toward water.
	
weeping willow sways
hazy through a summer screen 
wild waltz in hot wind

8/4/20

Traditional Haiku - Nature Themed' Contest
Sponsor:  Tania Kitchin

Copyright © Janis Medders Tobechi | Year Posted 2016

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James Horn Date: 9/6/2020 7:18:00 AM I always enjoy writing Horn Haiku. Yours is wonderful painting a great picture. Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/10/2020 7:27:00 AM Gorgeous haiku! I am particularly fond of the willow too. Congratulations for your win! xomo Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/8/2020 1:02:00 PM I love weeping willow trees, many congratulations on your win janis:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 8/8/2020 12:34:00 PM Beautiful Janis. congrats on a top win. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/8/2020 9:49:00 AM That last line was exceptional! Congrats on your win. Love willows!! Login to Reply

Aditi Mishra Date: 8/8/2020 6:29:00 AM I could picture that hot summer wind and the swaying weeping willow Janis. Congratulations on your win! :) Login to Reply

Mark Koplin Date: 8/7/2020 6:53:00 PM Beautiful! Congratulations on your win Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 8/7/2020 12:33:00 PM I do love the way willow trees move in the wind. You captured that beautifully in your "wild waltz!" Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/7/2020 9:08:00 AM Beautifully done, Janis! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/7/2020 6:05:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Love the images of weeping willow. Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 8/7/2020 4:15:00 AM Janis, congratulations on your winning placement with your gorgeous haiku! Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 4/18/2018 11:07:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Jean Murray Date: 4/17/2018 1:47:00 PM One of my favourite trees. So calming to be beneath, especially when they sway. Congratulations Sian. Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/17/2018 11:45:00 AM Gorgeous! Congratulations on your win :) xomo! Login to Reply

Mick Talbot Date: 4/17/2018 11:32:00 AM Thanks for your continued support Sian, congratulations on your bronze medal placing... Mick Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/17/2018 10:41:00 AM So beautiful! Congrats! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/17/2018 8:03:00 AM - Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 4/17/2018 7:53:00 AM Congrats on your bronze medal win, Sian. Login to Reply Mick Talbot Date: 4/17/2018 11:29:00 AM I guess you have had another look at my remit, going to stick with the medals. Thinking of featuring my choices on the remit page too, (just the first three as in 1st, 2nd, 3rd, what do you reckon?

Teddy Kimathi Date: 6/13/2017 7:46:00 PM Congrats once again Janis, for placing with this classic haiku!! ;-) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/8/2017 2:49:00 PM this is gorgeous! Congrats on the list. Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 11/19/2016 3:05:00 AM I enjoyed the simplistic imagery your haiku, Janis. Congrats for having it featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!! ;-) Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 6/9/2016 1:07:00 PM Lovely write Janis. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 6/9/2016 6:59:00 PM Thanks, James

David Mohn Date: 5/28/2016 5:46:00 PM truly beautiful...big congrats Janis! Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 5/28/2016 10:35:00 PM And a big thanks to you, David

Jesse Day Date: 5/28/2016 4:19:00 PM Love a well written haiku - congrats on your win! - Jesse Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 5/28/2016 10:34:00 PM Thanks so much, Jesse

Tim Smith Date: 5/28/2016 3:28:00 PM I can picture the willow dancing in the wind...lovely Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 5/28/2016 10:33:00 PM Thanks, Tim glad you got that image...

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