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Haiku

that crazy old quilt
she was piecing together
just before the stroke


Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/6/2016 11:26:00 AM
Aww shucks, this really got me, dear Daver-- I was not prepared for that-- really leaves an impact with me. Thank you very much for dropping by and saying what you said about Luna, it was such a treat for me to see you drop by... God bless you always-- nikko
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Date: 2/29/2016 6:06:00 PM
A very touching remarkable haiku. Of course I am going to fav it. As I do all your poetry Daver. As I have said before you are such an inspiration for me. Lots Of Love my friend always, Armand.
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daver austin
Date: 3/1/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thanks my so original, inventive friend. Love, daver
Date: 2/29/2016 4:05:00 PM
Hi again, Daver. How are things back in the midwest. It's nice weather recently. IN like a lamb, out like a damn lion?? sure do hope not!!
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Date: 3/1/2016 11:10:00 AM
Today we are expecting around 9 inches of snow. The kitties don't want to go outside. Neither do I. They say spring will arrive as usual. I am ready right now! Love, daver
Date: 2/27/2016 4:26:00 PM
using title haiku is just fine, Daver (Just reading what you said about titles. Haiku not supposed to have titles, so you did right).
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Date: 2/25/2016 12:37:00 AM
How sad, but a well written Haiku, Daver. T.J
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Date: 2/22/2016 4:00:00 PM
Love this one, Daver. Truly a good one.
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Date: 2/23/2016 2:25:00 PM
Oh, and why must a poem have a title? They should do away with the requirement
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Date: 2/23/2016 2:24:00 PM
wrote this one after viewing an ultra modern painting, You be cool. Love, daver