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Haiku 74 - Haiku 75- About A Bookmark

From between pages

the forgotten petal falls

Her scent still lingers

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a pressed rose

in between pages

his fading scent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 3/1/2015 1:00:00 PM
oh yes lovely Charmaine...I feel it. Good haiku pair
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:23:00 PM
duelling haikus both brilliant. you are the queen of the ku!
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Date: 10/6/2014 6:30:00 PM
Lovely and contrasting haiku, Charm. Impressive distinction between "lingers' and "fading". This deserves a fave. // paul
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Date: 10/6/2014 6:26:00 AM
now that leaves a book mark all by itself excellent pen charmaine
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Date: 10/5/2014 3:14:00 PM
Wow Charmaine these are simply stunning images - into faves and a 7 from me - one day I will press a rose - I just need to be given one first! Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 10/5/2014 3:10:00 PM
Beautiful.... I love both perspectives.... The scent draws me romantic the memory..... Hugs Tim
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