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Haiku 7-10-2018

staggering windblown beneath a hard sun cursing their roots John G. Lawless ©7/10/2018

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Date: 7/11/2018 9:34:00 AM
Enjoyed the hidden metaphor.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/11/2018 5:27:00 PM
Glad you like it Anisha
Date: 7/10/2018 11:09:00 PM
Excellent, John! Janice
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John Lawless
Date: 7/11/2018 7:28:00 AM
Thanks for popping by to comment
Date: 7/10/2018 5:13:00 PM
You decribe the heaviness aptly!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/11/2018 7:28:00 AM
Thanks Kim,
Date: 7/10/2018 8:29:00 AM
Potent imagery! Me likes :) xomo
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John Lawless
Date: 7/11/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, just thought I'd slip a clandestine metaphor herein

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