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Haiku 69-About the Swan Lake

swan lake a feather falls silently

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 10/22/2014 12:35:00 PM
Agreed with Lyric Man. I am always impressed with people who dare to push the limits with just how short the haiku can be. A real gem, this one... faving!
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Date: 10/2/2014 6:32:00 AM
swans always draw so beautiful forever they spend together very beautiful vision charmaine excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 10/1/2014 3:04:00 PM
Very nice short poem here. In a few words you bring a gorgeous scene to life. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/1/2014 2:56:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery! Love it.
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Date: 9/30/2014 7:21:00 PM
oh my goodness. you have done it again. this is perfection!!!
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Date: 9/30/2014 6:23:00 PM
This is silently perfect Charma......hugs Tim
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Date: 9/30/2014 5:51:00 PM
beautiful imagery Charmaine - its a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/30/2014 5:42:00 PM
Pretty image :)
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