Haiku 61 - Version 2

Haiku 61 _ Version 2 the neighbors arrive big rig diesel whumping our tiny trailer

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/5/2013 5:01:00 PM

A one line haiku,, I read every thing below. maybe I should post some I wrote 2011. I still want to move ;} You have a great day Jack ;}

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/5/2013 6:04:00 PM

why not post them? From what I can tell they are an acceptable haiku form... Jack

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2013 7:21:00 AM

Haiku written in one line..Creative work..Sara

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/7/2013 8:53:00 AM

A new type for me. See the reply to PD below. Thanks for the comment... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2013 11:35:00 PM

never seen a haiku like this... :-)...PD

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/7/2013 9:55:00 AM

My mistake... look at roadrunner journal.net

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/7/2013 8:47:00 AM

It's new to me too. I subscribed to the journal "Modern Haiku" where the one-line haiku is quite common. It maintains the 17 syllable count, but seems to allow relationships between words that wouldn't exist otherwise. Also look at http://issuu.com/roadrunner_ku/docs/r_r_13.1?e=4797175/2097435