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Haiku 6-16-2016

Haiku 6-16-2016 stillness on water nature gazing at herself longing for her youth John G. Lawless 6/16/2016

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Date: 6/18/2016 5:07:00 AM
This one runs deep. Nature gazing at herself - one of the best lines flowing seamlessly from the first line. A seven from me. ~karam~
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John Lawless
Date: 6/18/2016 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Karam for the high mark and the kind words.
Date: 6/17/2016 8:32:00 PM
wow, GOOD one. YES!
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John Lawless
Date: 6/18/2016 7:13:00 AM
So, Andrea, the Haiku/Senryu torments me but like the curious cat.....Thanks for your continuing support.

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