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haiku 5 - 2020

bare tree limbs and trunk winter wizard waved his wand gifted a white coat

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Date: 1/6/2020 5:29:00 AM
Ritsuko, thank you again for your lovely comments. It was a fun poem to write and you're right, it does feel like a child's poem.
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Rituko Shindo
Date: 1/6/2020 2:17:00 PM
Lovely poem.I imagined the trees in the snow happy to get a coat.
Date: 1/6/2020 1:47:00 AM
It is a very fantastic and a very cute poem. The moment I read this poem, I felt back to a little girl. Yes. Snow comes out of the wizard's wand. I remember that. I love this poem.
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