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Haiku

Field of daffodils brazen yellow, sun kissed petals, brightly greet The dawn of the day magically the sun rises flooding with colour Gently the stems quake as caught by the breeze they shake quiver in its wake Matching yellow bird soars over the display of beauty adding its sweet notes A vision of bliss such a simple little thing the joy of nature

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/21/2013 1:53:00 PM
Beautiful Shadow, thanks for opening the window of beauty through your haiku.... SKAT
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Date: 8/21/2013 4:02:00 PM
Ty Skat for reading and enjoying Shadow x smile
Date: 8/18/2013 7:30:00 PM
love this picture you've painted. Good poem
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Date: 8/21/2013 4:02:00 PM
ty PJ that means a lot to me Shadow x smile
Date: 8/18/2013 10:06:00 AM
Yes, it's joy of nature and ours too. Lovely worded in haiku. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/18/2013 3:11:00 PM
Hi Bl the simplicity of nature Ty glad you enjoyed Shadow x smile
Date: 8/18/2013 1:34:00 AM
these are lovely, Shadow especially the last one
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Date: 8/18/2013 3:10:00 PM
Ty Harry yes I agree with you glad you think them lovely Shadow x smile
Date: 8/17/2013 7:08:00 AM
- Just... beautiful !! - Have a great weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/17/2013 5:33:00 PM
Ty Anne Lise you brought a smile to my face . Have a great W/E too Shadow x smiles

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