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Haiku 47--A Summer Haiku

neighbor's lawn overgrown with thick grass and wild flowers wife had a baby [written and posted 6/27/21]

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2021 4:01:00 AM
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I can imagine that poor man is up at night and exhausted. I hope the neighbors jump in and help him by cutting his grass. I enjoyed reading this one. Congrats on your winner. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/21/2021 8:08:00 AM
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Well. he's almost 50 years younger than his neighbor, so, no, I didn't jump in as it's hard to cut grass when you walk with a cane! Thanks and I'm gad you like it, Sara
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/6/2021 2:59:00 PM
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Congrats to you LJ and to your neighbor! Things do seem to slide after the birth of a baby. Nicely done!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/7/2021 10:58:00 AM
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Thanks Sam!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/6/2021 5:07:00 AM
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Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/7/2021 10:58:00 AM
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Thank you!!!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/2/2021 8:54:00 PM
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Cute haiku, L.J.! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/7/2021 10:58:00 AM
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Thanks Kim
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2021 1:16:00 AM
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i can picture it so well LJ, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/1/2021 10:24:00 AM
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Thanks Jan!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/30/2021 9:53:00 PM
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Very interesting haiku. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/1/2021 10:24:00 AM
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Thank you!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/27/2021 10:27:00 AM
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Good one LJ, with sleepless nights the last thing on your mind would be cut the lawn lol. Tom
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/30/2021 10:41:00 AM
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Yes, and I love the look of a natural lawn!

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