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Haiku

asian forest path the bamboo humming my way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 4/12/2013 3:33:00 PM
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Whoa...'humming' bamboo...they are likely happy that there's no pandas around.:)) I just watched, the "Bucket List". sad , but in it's own way hilarious, Still, the ending made me weep. Oh, my brother and his movies! Meg said I should watch 'Sleeping Beauty':) The dwarves must be funny, yes? Keep well......love, Mikki :)
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Elizabeth Wesley
Date: 4/11/2013 4:49:00 PM
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Very oriental, would make my day to hear bamboo humming. They grow here too but take over; best planted where it doesn't matter. Methinks they are getting ready to put on their spring dress. Love, Lizzy
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/10/2013 3:00:00 PM
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this is really cool, very unique!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 4/8/2013 11:05:00 PM
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I think this is quite a 'noteworthy write' Daver.. L O L not exactly sure what Frankie Would make of it though.." take care Joe.. )
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 4/8/2013 2:24:00 AM
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hi my dear friend Daver...how are you,,thank you for your time and visit...enjoyed much your haiku...:) :) luv Sk.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/7/2013 6:16:00 PM
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watch out for pandas.....good one old Daver....
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David Williams
Date: 4/7/2013 3:33:00 PM
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Daver excellent...david
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/7/2013 11:49:00 AM
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Good morning Daver, love the haiku... i hope you ducked your head down...love..PD
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