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pen delivers thought into word-- baby cries

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/15/2013 8:44:00 AM
hi my sweet lady Mehnaz..i love reading your nice write.. amazing...<3 thanks you for stopping by my wall.. appreciate it so much dearest one <3 :) Sk
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Date: 2/5/2013 5:31:00 AM
Great contrast..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/6/2013 1:04:00 AM
thanks Sara..
Date: 2/2/2013 12:51:00 PM
Sweet and to the point- love it! Very well penned my dear poet friend :)
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:44:00 PM
thanks Anne,
Date: 2/1/2013 10:54:00 AM
And reality hits! This is a grand write Mehnaz! I truly loved reading this glorious poem this afternoon! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:44:00 PM
thanks Russell...
Date: 2/1/2013 8:33:00 AM
A very interesting personification!!! wow.
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Date: 2/1/2013 7:00:00 PM
soup mail....
Date: 2/1/2013 4:16:00 AM
this is wonderful 11 syllables of sheer joy...
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Date: 2/1/2013 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Harry....Was just trying to make it shorter than 17 syllable count