Haiku

indian paintbrush * beside the forest path deer tracks *wild flower

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/28/2012 7:22:00 AM

The wild places are so special Dave, I'm very lucky to be there too; Indian paintbruch just starting to show it's fuzzy head! :)

Cindy Cayton

Date: 8/25/2012 7:39:00 PM

so tranquil of a feeling I felt when reading your poem. Thanks so much for sharing this gem. Cindy

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/25/2012 12:38:00 PM

Opens a vista of this "forest path" in my mind, Daver! Isn't it great knowing what animals enjoy this same path? Keep well! Love, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2012 8:34:00 PM

IT is so beautiful. thanks for posting it here at Soup, daver. Love it.

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/24/2012 3:22:00 PM

Have enyoyed the wild hart L O L..) of this write Daver; pleased to read you today, Joe..)