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Haiku 3 - Pleasures in Moonlight

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the old lighthouse beamed the moon flickered o'er the waves ~~ dolphins danced in mirth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/4/2021 4:47:00 PM
I love the mirthful, dancing dolphins against the somber beauty of night, Victor. Beautiful!
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Date: 1/17/2021 3:51:00 AM
A gorgeous haiku, love the imagery!
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Date: 1/15/2021 7:16:00 AM
Ahhh!! Very peaceful. I wonder do they rest at night? Your acknowledgement of my Senryu was encouraging. Sara
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Date: 1/14/2021 1:54:00 PM
I love dolphins so I really love this one. Sorry I can't be here more often. Just swamped with things to do
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Date: 1/14/2021 1:01:00 PM
WoW!Victor, This is just lovely. I enjoyed the view. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/14/2021 11:26:00 AM
A beautiful picture you paint! What delights a lighthouse keeper’s eyes must see from time to time.
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Date: 1/13/2021 10:38:00 PM
An illuminated haiku, love it.
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Date: 1/13/2021 9:04:00 PM
beautiful haiku, Victor, great imagery and feel... Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/13/2021 9:00:00 PM
Ahhhhh delicate, beautiful imagery Victor. The word “mirth” makes it perfect!
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Date: 1/13/2021 2:54:00 PM
Beautiful image Victor. Tom
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Date: 1/13/2021 2:32:00 PM
Very nice Victor. I'd like to watch the dolphins dance :) Linda
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Date: 1/13/2021 2:17:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Victor.
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Date: 1/13/2021 1:43:00 PM
Wow Victor, this is a visual feast! I love it. Blessings xxoo
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