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Haiku 34 - Oklahoma Cycle

Dim sunrise, gray day, darkness Winter sadness. • Sweet sunrise, warning sirens. Spring threat. • White-hot sunrise, burnt crops. Summer killing. • Cool sunrise, dead falling leaves. Autumn closure.

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Date: 4/9/2013 2:30:00 PM
That was a nice set and great title for it.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 4/9/2013 3:42:00 PM
Thanks... The seasons are dramatic here, but lately more extreme. I hope it gets no worse. Jack
Date: 4/8/2013 8:59:00 AM
Jack; I love all four. Thanks - you did great..... Lucilla
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Date: 4/8/2013 9:23:00 AM
Thanks, Lucilla. Oklahoma weather is more problematic every year. Jack
Date: 4/7/2013 11:55:00 AM
ooo, you got the images down perfect... Love them all Jack...Linda
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Date: 4/7/2013 12:06:00 PM
Thanks, PD. It's just that time of year. Jack
Date: 4/7/2013 11:25:00 AM
Yep!
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:28:00 AM
I woke this morning thinking about tornados, and this just popped into my head. I guess it's the coming bad weather. Jack
Date: 4/7/2013 9:42:00 AM
- Four good haiku ... I like all of them, you are so clever with haiku Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:10:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. I hope you had a good weekend. Jack
Date: 4/7/2013 7:53:00 AM
Jack, great set of haiku's ....David
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Date: 4/7/2013 7:57:00 AM
Thanks, David. Tornado season is upon us here in Oklahoma. Jack

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