Haiku 30 Haiku 31 Blooms and Blossom
first blossom
blooming on bare branches
lifted spirits
- - -
first magnolia
blooms on a bare branch
new beginnings
(On debbie guzzi's advice
another magnolia try
to imrove last line of 2nd haiku)
first magnolia
blooms on a bare branch
the worst is over
Copyright © Charmaine Chircop | Year Posted 2013
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