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Haiku 3-12-2018

a saddened child holds tightly a long string a soaring kite John G. Lawless ©3/12/2018

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Date: 3/12/2018 9:22:00 PM
Oh such fantastic imagery and emotion John. A great haiku!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/13/2018 9:11:00 AM
I think you achieved your goal, John. This ending is open to many interpretations. Love it!
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John Lawless
Date: 3/13/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I was going for the "pick your own ending" mystery...
Date: 3/12/2018 7:36:00 PM
Hopefully will incite a smile :)
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John Lawless
Date: 3/13/2018 8:33:00 AM
Poor Charlie Brown....his kite was a "tree climber"

Book: Shattered Sighs