Haiku 2

cresting waves
carry waning sunlight--
footprints vanish

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Isaiah Zerbst

March 18, 2013 at 10:26 AM

Ah, that quality to which all poets aspire! What talent: I am sure my second attempt at this form is nowhere close.

Mehnaz Veetil

February 17, 2013 at 3:24 AM

enjoyed this Haiku here....

Andrea Dietrich

February 16, 2013 at 12:24 AM

soupmail for ya.

Debbie Duncan

February 14, 2013 at 11:11 AM

I love the haiku,,,, and the image you put forth,, happy Valentine's day Heather ;}

The Situation

February 11, 2013 at 2:05 PM

The sands rebirth.

Connie Gildersleeve

February 11, 2013 at 12:07 PM

Heather it amazes me with so few words a picture is formed. This reminds me of wintering in Florida, walking down the beach and the waves erases your footprints once was. A great Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie