Haiku 2

cresting waves carry waning sunlight-- footprints vanish

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 3/18/2013 10:26:00 AM

Ah, that quality to which all poets aspire! What talent: I am sure my second attempt at this form is nowhere close.

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 2/17/2013 3:24:00 AM

enjoyed this Haiku here....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2013 12:24:00 AM

soupmail for ya.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/14/2013 11:11:00 AM

I love the haiku,,,, and the image you put forth,, happy Valentine's day Heather ;}

The Situation

Date: 2/11/2013 2:05:00 PM

The sands rebirth.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/11/2013 12:07:00 PM

Heather it amazes me with so few words a picture is formed. This reminds me of wintering in Florida, walking down the beach and the waves erases your footprints once was. A great Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/9/2013 10:35:00 PM

i love your haiku....and the imagery ir has..A great haiku indeed sweet lady.Have a blessed Sunday

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2013 5:16:00 AM

Very descriptive in a very few words..Thanks for stopping by..It is an honor for my work to be selected as a winner in your contest..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2013 3:56:00 PM

wow, I just love the imagery of this one. That waning sunlight on the waves. Stunning, Heather. soupmail for ya.

Jancarl Campi

Date: 2/7/2013 2:59:00 PM

I reayy like this one. Thanks for publishing, Jancarl

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/7/2013 5:32:00 AM

yes very clever poetry this is,,just love the image...

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/6/2013 3:34:00 PM

This is good, Heather! Love the image it paints. Love, KIm

Jack Horne

Date: 2/6/2013 1:48:00 PM

love this one - I can almost picture myself at that beach : )