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Haiku # 29 .

Crocus  takes  a  peek

Youletide  Holly  says  goodbye

Daffodils  hold  sway  .

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Andrea Dietrich

April 13, 2010 at 12:11 PM

I really like this one, Sean. Excellent haiku! see ya, andrea

Marty Owens

October 8, 2009 at 6:48 AM

I know you've had these posted for a while but I'm just now getting around to reading lots of works. I like all of your Haikus! Thanks for making my morning. Marty

Sara Kendrick

August 20, 2009 at 4:00 AM

Beautifully written. Love the thoughts behind the pen. Sara

Elizabeth Neal

May 22, 2009 at 12:28 PM

Very good haiku, and thank you for the commet it was pretty funny. Love Elizabeth

Tyler Martin

April 28, 2009 at 1:04 AM

Nicely said and well written. Great job..Tyler

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

April 26, 2009 at 3:52 PM

Hello Spring. Sean, crocus takes a peek...is that in South Florida? We had crocus there when I was a child. They are so beautiful. And the daffodils...Yes, so springy. Nice write. Thanks for you comment on my work. Always, Dane

L'Nass Shango

April 16, 2009 at 12:41 PM

A wonderful bouquet of words ... regards again

Donald Meikle

April 3, 2009 at 11:45 AM

How does one soup mail? ( received one once)

Ernilando Tugaff

March 8, 2009 at 3:27 PM

Hello Sean, I love this Haiku, short, vivid and meaningful. Thank you for your honest commnet re: Michelle, My Li'l sister. Ernilando

Raul Moreno

February 17, 2009 at 1:20 PM

This is a nice haiku Sean, I like the last line...Raul

Amy Swanson

February 9, 2009 at 9:07 AM

Very pretty Sean! Nice picture of SPRING YAY :) and I am ready for it!! Love, Amy

Arany P.

February 9, 2009 at 2:46 AM

my haiku #1 was not supposed to have a sequel!! it was just the first hug... hahaha... gos i can't stop laughing at your thought!! but thanks... so i'm getting better at HAIKU?? ~ Arany

Arany P.

February 5, 2009 at 12:02 AM

thank you for your comments... but after cheching out your HAIKU... mine doesn't really seem that good!! you write so well... but i'll work on getting mine better... but your advice and comments mean a lot! ~ Arany

Michael Degenhardt

February 2, 2009 at 7:58 AM

This lets me know that spring can't be that far behind. A warming feeling. Great form and clarity. Michael

February 1, 2009 at 11:58 AM

Nice view. You paint a wonderful picture with your imagery here. I can't wait for spring and the flower to start peeking. Keep on writing. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

February 1, 2009 at 10:45 AM

My first daffodil this am..Love this write Sean..yes, old man winter your time is almost up. BG

Robin L. Gass

February 1, 2009 at 10:41 AM

Lovely images, Sean in perfect form. Love, The Queen

Laurie Ginn

February 1, 2009 at 9:38 AM

Its almost time to start my daily rounds through my gardens, expectantly watching the ground,,,eeessshhhh I cant wait. Laurie

Brian Strand

February 1, 2009 at 7:05 AM

Possibly in the snow tonight they say for hereabouts Sean.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sharon Winter

February 1, 2009 at 6:52 AM

Sean, you brought Spring to me today. Goodbye Holly! Hello beautiful, gorgeous, fragrant flowers! One of my favorite Spring haiku! Nicely done. Love, Shar