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Haiku 28 Wind Love

hear the wind b l  o   w    i     n      g


                        wild, swirling, hurricane power



                                   i ride your love






David Meade
11/13/2014

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Maurice Yvonne

November 20, 2014 at 9:12 PM

beautiful David how you have taught your heart to write. so many of us rely on a pen or a keyboard and even then can only write with our minds.

David Meade

November 21, 2014 at 8:10 PM

You are a master heart writer my friend . . . the brain just helps organize the words -- I look forward to experiencing many more writings from your heart!

Paul Callus

November 15, 2014 at 3:44 PM

Powerful write...like wind and love. I love it! // paul

David Meade

November 15, 2014 at 8:08 PM

Wind and love -- strong forces that need to be handled with care!! I can tell that you have much experience with these elements! Thank-you for your valuable time.

Andrea Dietrich

November 13, 2014 at 9:14 PM

oohhh a stunning final line. I love that kind of haiku. Glad to hear of another person who hates kimchi!!!

David Meade

November 13, 2014 at 10:03 PM

Had it in South Korea and in Dallas Texas -- both places it tasted like $$&%!! Also, thanks for the telling me about Temple -- I have two of her books already -- awesome.

Tim Smith

November 13, 2014 at 1:18 PM

Wow,..I'm impressed... Small but powerful... Cheers

David Meade

November 13, 2014 at 10:04 PM

Funny -- I have been telling my wife that exact same line!! Hope you are riding the wind. All the best.

Trinity Biles

November 13, 2014 at 1:09 PM

I love the force and impacts all your work has! I look forward to it everyday! -TJ

David Meade

November 13, 2014 at 10:05 PM

You are kind -- loved your poem today. Hope the wind is kind to you. love and light.

Kp Nunez

November 13, 2014 at 12:24 PM

Forceful! No doubt about its strength, your kind of wind, David. Interesting that I used the wind for my second poem...Love yours too. Kim

David Meade

November 13, 2014 at 10:06 PM

thanks Kim, the wind is a powerful force -- in word and nature. Look forward to reading more of your poems.

Charmaine Chircop

November 13, 2014 at 10:37 AM

This is so beautiful Dave.Did you ever consider publishing in magazines ?haikujournal.org pick haiku for submissions at times. The email address was www.haikujournnal.org(or . com) idf Im not mistaken. Btw ..you hit the bull in the eye on my moon hsiku.Tnks for your input.

David Meade

November 13, 2014 at 10:11 PM

You are very kind -- I start writing these haikus about a month ago, I thought I would try and write one a day for a year I then started posting them -- that is fun but more fun reading your sweet verses. I will keep you posted . . . hoping the moons shines upon you and you catch the wind and ride . . . love and light.

Elaine George

November 13, 2014 at 9:54 AM

Hi, David. I see you are a lover of Haiku, as am I. Very difficult form to do well, but you have! Also, thank you for your much appreciated comments on 'Ink Sports. Elaine

David Meade

November 13, 2014 at 10:02 AM

Awesome -- I love the challenge of this style . . . I try to use title, words, and spacing to squeeze out every last drop. I look forward to exploring more of your works. All the best.

Roseline Olajide

November 13, 2014 at 9:47 AM

Nice and cute i must say...thanks david

David Meade

November 13, 2014 at 10:11 PM

Thank-you -- see you on the other side of the wind.

Jan Allison

November 13, 2014 at 9:41 AM

A whirlwind of a write David -its gale force 9 here today - not a nice gentle romantic breeze! Hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison

November 13, 2014 at 10:02 AM

ha ha ha - well worth watching the biopic that Andrea mentioned - Autism is a fascinating subject and I learn something from the students every day:-) Hugs jan - and I really am a little one lol xx

David Meade

November 13, 2014 at 10:00 AM

"OK, I have this vision of you running to the loo writing responses -- now gale force winds . . . I am cracking up laughing . . . all the very best little one -- I saw the note regarding Temple . . . I am so grateful you shared her with me . . . I have devoured two of her books so far -- she is awesome. All the best. "

Sara Kendrick

November 13, 2014 at 9:09 AM

Interesting work...Love is like the wind or is the wind..Interesting configuration as well..Thanks for dropping by ....The doctor says that the vision will improve over the next week..Another lady in our Sunday School class just had it done a few months back and she was doutful at first but her vision came in good and she only uses reading glasses..Sara

David Meade

November 13, 2014 at 9:32 AM

This is good . . . just need more patients . . . Having fun with the wind. Keep warm. all the best.

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