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perilous waters….

        first star of evening tide

               point of reference








For Annalise Brigham's contest
"What My Eyes See"

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Andrea Dietrich

December 20, 2012 at 10:07 PM

carrie, just came back here to say thanks so much for your card. In your picture you looked really cute!!! Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2011 at 10:50 AM

Congratulations Carrie,on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

February 28, 2011 at 9:20 AM

Hello Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful Poem win! Beautiful As Always, Shar

John Freeman

February 27, 2011 at 3:43 PM

Beautiful Haiku, Carrie, and so true a referemce point is this evening star. Congratulations on your worthy poems first place honor. Agape, Moses

Ralph Taylor

February 27, 2011 at 12:20 PM

Congrats on your well deserved 1st Place win, Carrie. Great job. Nice going. xxxRalph

Caryl Muzzey

February 27, 2011 at 11:27 AM

Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Kash Poet

February 27, 2011 at 11:03 AM

Congrats Carrie on your 1st place win with this excellent Haiku!---kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 27, 2011 at 8:10 AM

Super congrats on your awesome win with this striking haiku, Carrie :) hugs :)

Sara Kendrick

February 27, 2011 at 7:33 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 27, 2011 at 7:20 AM

Congrats Carrie on your first place win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy a well deserved top spot with luv..

Tahera Mannan

February 27, 2011 at 3:08 AM

A superb take on the pic. many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2011 at 11:06 PM

Awesome win, Carrie. WAy to Go!!

Joyce Johnson

February 26, 2011 at 9:31 PM

Big congratulations Carrie for your lovely haiku and big win. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

February 26, 2011 at 8:37 PM

Congratulations on your Ist Place Win in my contest, Carrie. Very well deserved! Love, Annalise

Elaine George

February 25, 2011 at 8:48 AM

Very mystical vision, dear Carrie.

Nette Onclaud

February 24, 2011 at 10:34 PM

as always, a descriptive play of images, carrie.. winning wishe to you! :) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 24, 2011 at 1:38 PM

beautiful interpretation of the picture, Carrie

Kash Poet

February 24, 2011 at 1:11 PM

Wondeful interpretation of the contest photo!A great entry into the contest----kashinath

Sara Kendrick

February 24, 2011 at 12:44 PM

Good one.Very creative and expressive work...Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Good luck..Sara

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