Haiku

perilous waters….

        first star of evening tide

               point of reference








For Annalise Brigham's contest
"What My Eyes See"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/20/2012 10:07:00 PM
carrie, just came back here to say thanks so much for your card. In your picture you looked really cute!!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie,on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:20:00 AM
Hello Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful Poem win! Beautiful As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:43:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Carrie, and so true a referemce point is this evening star. Congratulations on your worthy poems first place honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2011 12:20:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved 1st Place win, Carrie. Great job. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:03:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your 1st place win with this excellent Haiku!---kashinath
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:10:00 AM
Super congrats on your awesome win with this striking haiku, Carrie :) hugs :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:20:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy a well deserved top spot with luv..
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:08:00 AM
A superb take on the pic. many warm congrats for this success.
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:06:00 PM
Awesome win, Carrie. WAy to Go!!
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:31:00 PM
Big congratulations Carrie for your lovely haiku and big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2011 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your Ist Place Win in my contest, Carrie. Very well deserved! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/25/2011 8:48:00 AM
Very mystical vision, dear Carrie.
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Date: 2/24/2011 10:34:00 PM
as always, a descriptive play of images, carrie.. winning wishe to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/24/2011 1:38:00 PM
beautiful interpretation of the picture, Carrie
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Date: 2/24/2011 1:11:00 PM
Wondeful interpretation of the contest photo!A great entry into the contest----kashinath
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Date: 2/24/2011 12:44:00 PM
Good one.Very creative and expressive work...Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Good luck..Sara
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