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Haiku 27 28 29 About the Moon

my bedroom window glows in silence alone with the moon - - - my bedroom window glows in silence full moon - - - my bedroom window glows in silence the moon and i

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 4/22/2013 11:17:00 AM

The first one speaks to me. This was a good idea, I think, including differing versions. Different words speak to different people in different ways. Everyone is as unique as the many different poems.

Therese Bacha

Date: 4/14/2013 6:46:00 PM

Have to give the 7>>>>>>>

Therese Bacha

Date: 4/14/2013 6:45:00 PM

Ok WOW, this is beautiful, i am starting to understand now. Love Terry xoxoxo a 7 <<<<<<<

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2013 4:52:00 PM

by far, Charma, my vote is on number ONE. (third one comes in second)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/6/2013 4:18:00 PM

THIRD one!!!

Jack Jordan

Date: 4/6/2013 9:35:00 AM

You haiku series are quite interesting. There is continuity among them, a passage of time and circumstance which leads me to read "or" as "and." Nice work! Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2013 8:57:00 PM

Hello Charma, your poem is lovely, and as always you are amazing when it comes to haiku.. i sure love that moon... xox...pd

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/5/2013 8:40:00 PM

The first one is my favorite as well... but all are quite brilliant! We are never truly alone. The light is always there! Always, Laura

Tobey Hill

Date: 4/5/2013 3:55:00 PM

I like all three Miss Malta. Congrats as well on the little one...TAH

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/5/2013 7:30:00 AM

I like the 1st the most. They all remind me of a song from one of my favorite bands, Opeth, called Windowpane. Have a listen to their Live version, it's quite gripping and a perfect fit to these set of Haikus. Another great job! :)

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/5/2013 6:43:00 AM

I think I like the first one best...but all of them are excellent!