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Haiku 20 Haiku 21 About a Different Spring

grandma's garden a missing rose lay on her stone longing another Spring blooms without you

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Poet Tacito

Date: 4/4/2013 6:16:00 AM

Very deep lines. This hits hard. I understand that feeling.

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/1/2013 7:47:00 AM

Incredible, Charmaine! Keep it up!

Christine Phillips

Date: 3/30/2013 6:44:00 AM

Hi Charmaine, I scrolled through hundreds of poems on this site but I love this piece.It is well written and tells a powerful story.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2013 10:47:00 PM

wow, these are good to read. Great imagery AND meaning!

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 3/28/2013 11:18:00 AM

The emotional qualities of this poem are exceptional! Sweet sadness, longing, remembering. Perfect I think.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/28/2013 5:10:00 AM

Very sad and beautiful Haiku series, Charma...'a missing rose lay on her stone'...Wow - Tim