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haiku 20 haiku 21 about a different Spring

grandma's garden a missing rose lay on her stone longing another Spring blooms without you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/4/2013 6:16:00 AM
Very deep lines. This hits hard. I understand that feeling.
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Date: 4/1/2013 7:47:00 AM
Incredible, Charmaine! Keep it up!
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Date: 3/30/2013 6:44:00 AM
Hi Charmaine, I scrolled through hundreds of poems on this site but I love this piece.It is well written and tells a powerful story.
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Date: 3/28/2013 10:47:00 PM
wow, these are good to read. Great imagery AND meaning!
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Date: 3/28/2013 11:18:00 AM
The emotional qualities of this poem are exceptional! Sweet sadness, longing, remembering. Perfect I think.
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Date: 3/28/2013 5:10:00 AM
Very sad and beautiful Haiku series, Charma...'a missing rose lay on her stone'...Wow - Tim
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