Haiku 20

baby pictures
next to the army ones -
sunlight on both

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Debbie Duncan

April 21, 2013 at 11:14 AM

well that's a nice scene ;}

Timothy Hicks

April 22, 2013 at 8:26 AM

Thanks again Debbie!

Timothy Hicks

April 17, 2013 at 1:09 AM

Thanks all for the lovely feedback. Glad that it was well received!

Andrea Dietrich

April 16, 2013 at 5:21 PM

this is darling!!

Jack Jordan

April 16, 2013 at 11:03 AM

Nice... Passage of time, a wish for he best. Good one, Timothy... Jack

Richard Lamoureux

April 16, 2013 at 7:06 AM

I'm glad he made it home to have the Babies.

Laura Breidenthal

April 15, 2013 at 8:34 PM

Beautiful haiku here. Always, Laura

Sara Kendrick

April 15, 2013 at 11:52 AM

I can see the scene..Very expressive and descriptive in a few words..Sara

Fred Bell

April 15, 2013 at 11:26 AM

very nice i like it.

Eileen Manassian

April 15, 2013 at 4:46 AM

Timothy...lovely haiku! Lovely message! :) Photography is my other hobby....reminiscing is a favorite pastime! Hugs!

Timothy Hicks

April 16, 2013 at 1:12 AM

I'm no good at photography, but it's always nice to capture moments! (whether in writing or in snapping shots). Love reading your comments!

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