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Haiku

white skies . . .
a grumpy groundhog
emerges

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/26/2010 5:49:00 PM

Deb, you don't need a title for haiku, and historically, most haiku do not have titles. Haiku titles are derived from its first line when necessary... but some people have written haiku with titles. Your title fits well though. Thanks, Connie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/26/2010 5:33:00 PM

You need title dear..how about The Emergance? Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/8/2010 1:17:00 PM

very cute poem, keep sharing!!

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 2/5/2010 2:41:00 PM

Cute, just what we needed, another grumpy groundhog. Mac

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/5/2010 12:10:00 PM

Six more weeks of winter! Great write!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2010 7:40:00 PM

How appropriate to write of this creature in his special month with such brilliant words of Haiku... great tribute but more winter coming ... thankxxx for your congrats and special comments on my poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2010 1:06:00 PM

hahaha this is really cute, connie!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/3/2010 7:05:00 AM

I enjoyed reading you poem this morning Connie. Thank you for posting and sharing with us. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/2/2010 9:41:00 AM

He does always look grumpey, doesn't he, Connie? Guess we're all a bit grumpy after learning there will be six more weeks of winter. Nicely done haiku! Love, Carolyn

The Fringe

Date: 2/2/2010 9:22:00 AM

Connie, Happy Groundhog Day!!! I Love that movie so much my friends actually wish me a happy groundhog day. So, 6 more weeks? To take a line from the movie, "...and standing here amongst the people of Punxutawney and basking in the warmth of their hearths and hearts, I couldn't imagine a better fate than a long and lustrous winter." Thanks for getting the Groundhog Day festivities going for us late sleepers :) David

Susan Palli

Date: 2/2/2010 9:19:00 AM

I like that!