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white skies . . . a grumpy groundhog emerges

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/26/2010 5:49:00 PM
Deb, you don't need a title for haiku, and historically, most haiku do not have titles. Haiku titles are derived from its first line when necessary... but some people have written haiku with titles. Your title fits well though. Thanks, Connie
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Date: 2/26/2010 5:33:00 PM
You need title dear..how about The Emergance? Light & Love
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Date: 2/8/2010 1:17:00 PM
very cute poem, keep sharing!!
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Date: 2/5/2010 2:41:00 PM
Cute, just what we needed, another grumpy groundhog. Mac
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Date: 2/5/2010 12:10:00 PM
Six more weeks of winter! Great write!
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Date: 2/4/2010 7:40:00 PM
How appropriate to write of this creature in his special month with such brilliant words of Haiku... great tribute but more winter coming ... thankxxx for your congrats and special comments on my poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:06:00 PM
hahaha this is really cute, connie!!
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading you poem this morning Connie. Thank you for posting and sharing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:41:00 AM
He does always look grumpey, doesn't he, Connie? Guess we're all a bit grumpy after learning there will be six more weeks of winter. Nicely done haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:22:00 AM
Connie, Happy Groundhog Day!!! I Love that movie so much my friends actually wish me a happy groundhog day. So, 6 more weeks? To take a line from the movie, "...and standing here amongst the people of Punxutawney and basking in the warmth of their hearths and hearts, I couldn't imagine a better fate than a long and lustrous winter." Thanks for getting the Groundhog Day festivities going for us late sleepers :) David
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:19:00 AM
I like that!
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:14:00 AM
Well what do that hog see and feel? Keep the creative pen flowing. Great Haiku. Sara
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