Haiku 201 whispers

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stars radiant show
sun fades behind ebbing sea~
nature still whispers

12/8/2023

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Hilo Poet

Date: 12/9/2023 10:24:00 AM

Soothingly sedative rest assured--still awake. Nicely done, Eve, enjoyed. Aloha, William

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/8/2023 6:32:00 PM

A poem with great feeling. I could imagine seeing the sun setting and the quiet of evening.in the atmosphere. This was pleasant to read.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/8/2023 1:25:00 PM

Stunningly moving, expressive, and intelligent composition, Eve! Beautiful shots of shimmering. You possess a linguistic ability that is at once tender and profound.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/8/2023 12:48:00 PM

- Beautiful, Eve :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 12/8/2023 12:47:00 PM

Simply lovely Eve! Debx

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/8/2023 12:32:00 PM

Yes this one is lovely, Eve. Great photo with it!

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2023 11:40:00 AM

Stunning shimmering imagery... They are planktons on the beach... Ink told me about them once upon a time..

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2023 11:04:00 AM

Oh wow eve this is one of my most fave, bioluminescence. This year during new years most of the islands here had their beaches lit up with planktons. Its like stars on the beach and i never get enough of playing with them. Hard to always capture them on camera. The picture you’ve used here looks like one of maldives beaches. This is a fave for me . Just love it!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/8/2023 8:02:00 AM

A beautiful Haiku write/picture. Have a blessed day...................

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/8/2023 7:58:00 AM

Oh wow bioluminescence and planktons, wowwe I absolutely loveee that! Truly they shimmer like sea-stars and it's like playing with the ocean waves.. I'm loving the gorgeous imagery you've created in this exquisite haiku, where 'nature still whispers'... I feel caressed by the ebbing sea and that fading light of the sun.. A FAV for me, truly :)