Haiku

silver rain on thorns love is a rose not picked loss is full of thorns By Susan Mills

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Daver Austin

Date: 12/19/2012 2:48:00 PM

"Love is a rose not picked." I like that. Congrats on the selection. daver

Bill Frew

Date: 3/24/2010 7:55:00 PM

luv it,keep going,thanx!

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 2/25/2010 7:59:00 AM

"love is a rose not picked"... so true. xo

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/17/2010 10:19:00 AM

A very good Haiku, I enjoyed it. I especially like the last line. I agree with others, this is the best. Thank you for your comments on mine. Caryl

Mike Butler

Date: 2/2/2010 11:06:00 AM

Very good Haiku! Thanks for your comments. Keep writing!!! -Mike

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2010 7:04:00 PM

oh, this is the best one so far. Very insightful. Luv, andrea

Date: 1/29/2010 2:38:00 PM

So much truth in your words. Hope those roses just keep on coming in your life. I really like the opening line. Thank you for your sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2010 6:00:00 AM

What an excellent Haiku you have written here Susan. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/26/2010 5:31:00 PM

"Love is a rose not picked...." What great lines!!! Well done, Susan!