Haiku

silver rain on thorns
love is a rose not picked
loss is full of thorns

By Susan Mills

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Daver Austin

December 19, 2012 at 2:48 PM

"Love is a rose not picked." I like that. Congrats on the selection. daver

Bill Frew

March 24, 2010 at 7:55 PM

luv it,keep going,thanx!

Izzy Gumbo

February 25, 2010 at 7:59 AM

"love is a rose not picked"... so true. xo

Caryl Muzzey

February 17, 2010 at 10:19 AM

A very good Haiku, I enjoyed it. I especially like the last line. I agree with others, this is the best. Thank you for your comments on mine. Caryl

Mike Butler

February 2, 2010 at 11:06 AM

Very good Haiku! Thanks for your comments. Keep writing!!! -Mike

Andrea Dietrich

January 29, 2010 at 7:04 PM

oh, this is the best one so far. Very insightful. Luv, andrea

January 29, 2010 at 2:38 PM

So much truth in your words. Hope those roses just keep on coming in your life. I really like the opening line. Thank you for your sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen