Haiku 2-10-2018

Haiku 2/10/2018 winter - lies in thaw blooms coaxed from hiding, a cold lover John G. Lawless ©2/10/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2018 8:49:00 PM

ooohhhh GREAT KU. I really love the last line.

John Lawless
Date: 2/13/2018 11:14:00 AM

thanks Andrea...

Paul Callus

Date: 2/11/2018 2:19:00 PM

I can picture the image you have created, John, and the meaning behind it. Still, if that lover comes with cold hands it's surely a sign of a warm heart:) Regards // paul

John Lawless
Date: 2/13/2018 11:14:00 AM

you know the old saying....."cold hands....lost mittens.....

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/11/2018 8:39:00 AM

The battle against winter begins,I've seen snowdrops and daffodils , spring can't come quick enough. Regards Tom

John Lawless
Date: 2/11/2018 8:42:00 AM

I see the soft furry buds on some of the trees and know that they will feel the sting of Winter's fickle winds before spring arrives.