Haiku 1

waves lashing the shore underneath a moonlit sky day breaks on dry sand

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2014 2:39:00 PM

Hi Jenny, perfect for a haiku. Love the splashing and moonlit imagery...Linda

Jenny Brewer
Date: 5/14/2014 2:47:00 PM

Hi Linda, Thank you very much.

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 5/13/2014 5:09:00 PM

Nice piece. Glad to see someone else knows the correct number of syllables that go into a haiku.

Jenny Brewer
Date: 5/13/2014 5:59:00 PM

Thank you Mark, I am not very experienced in writing Haikus but I am actively studying them and their form,I am learning . I have a couple more on here too.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/13/2014 4:27:00 PM

I can imagine laying there on the beach with the waves lashing onto my legs as I gaze into the moonlit sky....Wonderful Haiku Jenny...hugs Tim

Jenny Brewer
Date: 5/13/2014 6:02:00 PM

Hi Tim,thank you,sounds great,can I join you,I just love the sea .xx

Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2014 4:05:00 PM

beautiful imagery in this lovely haiku Jenny. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Jenny Brewer
Date: 5/13/2014 4:10:00 PM

Aww thanks Jan xxx