Haiku 1

waves lashing the shore
underneath a moonlit sky
day breaks on dry sand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 14, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Hi Jenny, perfect for a haiku. Love the splashing and moonlit imagery...Linda
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May 14, 2014 at 2:47 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you very much.
Halliday Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 5:09 PM
Nice piece. Glad to see someone else knows the correct number of syllables that go into a haiku.
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May 13, 2014 at 5:59 PM
Thank you Mark, I am not very experienced in writing Haikus but I am actively studying them and their form,I am learning . I have a couple more on here too.
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May 13, 2014 at 4:27 PM
I can imagine laying there on the beach with the waves lashing onto my legs as I gaze into the moonlit sky....Wonderful Haiku Jenny...hugs Tim
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May 13, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Hi Tim,thank you,sounds great,can I join you,I just love the sea .xx
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 4:05 PM
beautiful imagery in this lovely haiku Jenny. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx
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May 13, 2014 at 4:10 PM
Aww thanks Jan xxx
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